Like a flame …

Like a flame

love burns my soul;

like a moth

I flutter;

with singed wings

I try to fly ..

to no avail

I exclaim;

I twist and turn

inside the pain ..

for there is no denying

that love

is vulnerability’s second name …

About atomsofstars

Reticent .. but I hope my poetry speaks for me .. Favourite quotation .. ' Uttering a word is like striking a note on the keyboard of the imagination.' Ludwig Wittgenstein
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6 Responses to Like a flame …

  1. Shermeen says:

    Bravo.

  2. JM says:

    Hello, Marya.
    You capture well the double-edge of love. It is as if there is a price to pay for our joys, perhaps to remind us of something. Perhaps the singed wings are the Receipt that marks our Giving.

  3. atomsofstars says:

    Hello, Jamie …

    Thank you very much.

    I like your thoughts … our human love is but a pale shadow compared with God’s love for us.

  4. Burning for love is sometimes the best way to reinvent yourself, Cornish poetess!…

  5. atomsofstars says:

    A dramatic conflagration then, Didacus 🙂

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