Interlude …

Sea mist lingers beyond the harbour walls

muffling the mewing of the seagulls’ calls.

The silvered sea a mirror to the blank canvas sky

as with silent wing beats they glide by.

An interlude of stillness for the restless sea:

an interlude of stillness becalming me … .

About atomsofstars

Reticent .. but I hope my poetry speaks for me .. Favourite quotation .. ' Uttering a word is like striking a note on the keyboard of the imagination.' Ludwig Wittgenstein
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4 Responses to Interlude …

  1. Enjoyed it; I unsubscribed above and subcribed to get updates by email.

    • atomsofstars says:

      Good afternoon … Thank you very much .. you’re most kind. I’m delighted to know that this particular poem appealed to you and you enjoy your visits here.

  2. didacuscorner says:

    Ave, poetess! Londinenses te salutant and estimate ‘Interlude’ between their top ten…The first
    distich is a poem, in two lines…I hear as some wonderful, syrenic sounds… ‘Beyond’,of first line,
    reminds me something of the sea, in my language, too, because ‘onda’ is ‘wave’ , in italian and
    ‘unda’, in Londinium… True thanks.

  3. atomsofstars says:

    Ave, Didacus!
    Thank you very much … that’s the fascination of language, isn’t it. ‘Onda’ has a pleasant flowing sound to my English ears .. a beautiful word, I think.
    As I quoted from Wittgenstein above ..’ uttering a word is like striking a note on the keyboard of the imagination’ 🙂

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