The setting sun …


On the edge of darkness

as the first faint star appears

beyond the flush of the horizon,

lies a world of dreams and fears.

Let not that melancholy veil

shroud the promise of the day;

let me not fear the moonless night;

let not my hopes and spirit quail.

Bring the streams of broken cloud

forward to the edge of light;

let not my cowardice prevail.

As the resplendent colours fade

let me see beauty in this vision;

let me not be afraid.

As the lightless moon ascends

let me remember that the sun

shines like love

beyond the darkness that descends ..

Remove the blindfold; let me see

where those fears and dreams were made:

embolden me … .

About atomsofstars

Reticent .. but I hope my poetry speaks for me .. Favourite quotation .. ' Uttering a word is like striking a note on the keyboard of the imagination.' Ludwig Wittgenstein
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10 Responses to The setting sun …

  1. a very lovely poem i enjoyed this a lot from kevin.

  2. my pleasure i hope you may enjoy my poetry aswell its good to let others know what they are doing is worthwhile and bringing others pleasure to. makes world a nicer place.

  3. papaguinea says:

    With your permission I would like to show this to a Prison Chaplain where I work. It is very much like a prayer and I can imagine women reciting or reading this. It is a comforter. It is lovely. You tap a rich seam of language!

    • atomsofstars says:

      Hello PapaG …

      Lovely to see you this evening … I am much moved by your words .. thank you very much.
      It would be a great honour for me to know that these thoughts might afford some comfort .. I often pray for courage..
      It’s very kind of you to ask permission but really not necessary … the poem’s yours 🙂

      Love to PapaG Junior and a hug x ( and another Birthday, soon 🙂 )

  4. JM says:

    Good morning, Marya.

    When we’re in a certain mood, the setting of the sun can be un-nerving, can’t it? we feel a terrible loss, as if the motions of the stars and the world might cease twixt sleep and rising. But always there is hope – an echo of certainty – for when did the Creator ever disappoint us in such matters? Do we deserve such faithfullness? 🙂

  5. atomsofstars says:

    Good morning, Jamie ..

    Yes, indeed it can … but the sun always rises no matter how long the night 🙂

  6. Shermeen says:

    One thinks of these things; muddled yet distinct and aspirational ideas, one thinks and absorbs them but can do nothing more… but atom has the amazing ability to put the ideas and thoughts in living, breathing, expressive words.

    Another beautiful poem! This morning reading some of your poems has been an experience emanating a surfeit of beauty 🙂

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